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KatKali
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since 2008-01-03
Posts 67
Where the wispers grow louder

0 posted 2009-10-10 02:19 PM


As the clock swings,
Silence hums,
Stains cover the floor,
Her heart riped out,
She lies,
"Every thing's okay",
The cold hard truth,
Is that he's gone,
And she all alone,
With big wide eyes looking up at her,
She trys to make it though.

© Copyright 2009 Abigail Arnold - All Rights Reserved
N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 2009-07-30
Posts 360
New Orleans
1 posted 2009-10-23 03:21 AM


Beautifully captured.
MorningStar
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since 2009-10-26
Posts 290
Pittsburgh, Pa
2 posted 2009-10-27 04:02 PM


Wow, this is devastating.  Excellent!
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