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zaaclindsay
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since 2009-08-12
Posts 111
Ottawa Ontario

0 posted 2009-08-14 01:06 PM



She doesn't have to worry anymore
she doesn't have to wonder
if she's pretty enough
to be warmed
by true loves heart

And she smiles
because she can't remember when
she ever thought her dream
could be smiling back
from 'tween her silken hands

And she knows
that she is loved
she knows that she is truly
someone's dove in hand

and she knows that she is loved
much more than she will ever understand
in the soft and gentle hands...
the hands of the lover of her heart

He doesn't have to wander anymore
He doesn't have to admire love
admire from afar

He always hoped
that he was just a step away
from love come calling
from a distant shore
dreaming himself into the eyes
of the lover of his heart

And he smiles
'cause he can't remember why
he forgot that what is promised
will always come to be

And her gentle sigh reminds him
that he is loved
He knows the chance of a lifetime
lies sleeping in his arms

He knows that he is loved
much more than he will ever understand

And when he falls into her eyes
trembling hands around her heart
He knows there's no more waiting...
He finally sees
the Master Plan


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GBride
Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538

1 posted 2009-10-22 08:10 PM


Exciting!!!
I am sitting at the kitchen table on the wind-swept plains of Nebraska in a rural setting. The days work is over and over the top of the computer I see my two pet rabbits have their backs to me. They like to look out the windows even though it is dark and they can see nothing outside.
The chill of the October evening is upon me.
The reading of your poem has warned me considerably. The only problem is I'm jealous of your talent!

zaaclindsay
Member
since 2009-08-12
Posts 111
Ottawa Ontario
2 posted 2009-10-25 03:31 PM


jealous?  wow...not necessary.  I've had writers block for quite a while now.  But then again, life is changing fast for me and I usually don't write til after the fact...unless there is a muse available and I haven't found one lately.  thank you for the comment.  It was kind, but i am thinking you are more talented than you give yourself credit for.

zaac

I kept wondering why that frisbee kept getting bigger and bigger....and then it hit me.

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