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priyanka
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since 2009-06-15
Posts 216
india

0 posted 2009-09-26 05:25 PM


You came to me
And stole my heart
You said no word
And it broke my heart

You showed up as if on a cue
As if just nothing anew
Bereft me my mind
There is nothing more to me bind

To this place you call world
Where frozen expressions their faces hold
All I despise, nothing but cold
Not one I see who tries not, they withhold

To be what they want to be
They hide under colourful canopy
Different shades of green I see
Why don't they go and let me be
Just why can't you see

That for you I beared all I could
If there ever be that we would
Be together I thought it be true
With those thoughts I grew

And now I'm left with nothing
No bondage to the world
No conflicting thoughts restraining
Unleash myself, no need to mold

This pretended life be dead
It goes all above my head
There is nothing much left to be said
For I just can't get undead

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GBride
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since 2009-07-02
Posts 538

1 posted 2009-10-22 08:03 PM


"This pretended life be dead,
it all goes above my head."
As I sit here in front of the computer, not knowing who you are, it is a rainy October evening,here on the wind-swept plains of Nebraska.
The days work is done. The stray cats that live on the back porch are fed, and I'm feeling the chill of October.
As I look over the top of the computer I can see the backs of my pet rabbits as they look out the window which they like to do even though it is dark and they cannot see anything outside.
Your poem has warmed me considerably.

priyanka
Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216
india
2 posted 2011-10-03 06:42 PM


wow! I just rad your post. I might be replying too late. But knowing that it made an impression in that manner, I feel truly honoured. Thank you
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