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zaaclindsay
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since 2009-08-12
Posts 111
Ottawa Ontario

0 posted 2009-08-17 10:29 AM



sometimes late at night
I hear you calling out.
It echos from the corners
of my heart

I turn to catch your smile
and the diamonds in your eyes
And I start to smile back,
but you're gone.

I hope its more than
just a vision;
more like a
premonition
Of things that should have been
and still should be

And I'm counting on the heavens
to hold you once more and forever
To leave this world with more
than just your smile...

more than just the diamonds in your eyes...

a simple tender love that altered time.

© Copyright 2009 David I Graf - All Rights Reserved
deleeme
Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
1 posted 2009-09-10 06:09 PM


Nice, sweet and endearing poem.
Such sentiments tug at the heartstrings.

I thank the LORD everyday
He has given me something to say
And to share with others,
My Friends, my sisters, my brothers!

To God Be the Glory!

Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
2 posted 2009-09-12 11:56 AM


Very nicely written. Love keeps them close.  Love Joyce
latearrival
Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
3 posted 2009-09-25 11:04 AM


And I, I chanced to  whisper your name, and now I read you heard me calling. Softly, softly, for it can never be.

Enjoyed your poem. latearrival

brneyedgrly
Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere
4 posted 2009-10-07 06:54 PM


I sent a link to my email so we can discuss your offer...for some reason it comes in the spam folder..check there

btw..this is a nice poem  

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