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Endless (rictameter)

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2009-08-12 07:47 AM

endless
boundries of space
beyond comprehension
celestial star studded place
traversed by comets and solar zephyrs
provoke the imagination
to new contemplation
for that which is
endless

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2009-08-12 10:49 AM

Dennis,

Your poem touched with the beauty and truth of your words. You packed a punch in lovely presentation. Thank you.

Oh! And what a gorgeous horse!

Alison

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2009-08-13 02:33 PM

Very, very nice Dennis. Good to read you here. Love, Joyce

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

3 posted 2009-08-17 11:46 AM

I like the mysterious and dreamlike feel of your poem

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

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