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collins613
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since 2009-05-08
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0 posted 2009-05-08 01:11 PM



Getting On

I loll about the pool;
the waters cool my skin.
I dream about the grass I relished yesterday.
Absently I look about.
Where could Hank be now?
In vain I seek my friend.
I recall.  
He is gone!
Taken by the plague
which assailed our pod.
Same age as me, Hank was;
Bigger and stronger, though.
With brazen cheek of youth
a bull sits in Hank’s place;
smarmy grin on his face,
baiting me to give chase.
My mind prepares an attack;
My body says “no way”.
I will get Hank’s spot back;
I yawn, just not today.
I spin my tail, defecate,
I am hippo, big and bad!
I slide down into the mud.
Crocs all scatter like mad.
My years march on stubbornly.
I’m a nuisance to the young.
Try and make me go away;
if you dare.  
I am ornery.
I am fierce.
I am here to stay.


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Denise
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1 posted 2009-05-09 06:03 PM


Sounds like me too often lately, I'm afraid to say!

Very entertaining poem, collins613!

Rex Allen McCoy
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2 posted 2009-05-15 10:47 AM


I could read poems like this one all day

cool

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
3 posted 2009-05-15 10:47 AM


oops
collins613
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since 2009-05-08
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NYC, NY
4 posted 2009-05-15 11:15 AM


I enjoyed writing this one.
(Not always the case!).
Thanks for the feedback.

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