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Jane Eyre New Member
since 2009-01-09
Posts 9Canada |
I see you from across the room, My face suddenly becomes warm, A blush appears You come closer, My eyes run over your features, Your curly hair, oh that curly hair, Your green eyes meet mine, I think that I just blushed even more, My heart is beating so fast, I swear that everyone around me can hear it You’re coming closer, Oh goodness, someone hide me My palms become sweaty, Oh I hope that I don’t have to shake your hand Oh goodness, now you’re in front of me, You say something, But I can’t hear you, Over my rapidly beating heart Oh God, please give me the right words to say, I say something, I don’t even know what I said, My mind is whirling, You smile, and laugh Oh that smile, That laugh, This innocence |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Just an oh so familiar feeling type of poem, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. That warm, fuzzy feeling we have all felt at some age, some time. Check your email for a special welcome from us all, and a personal welcome to you. Carpe' Diem, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a lovely entrance into Passions in Poetry, Jane! Welcome! Please check your email for a Very Special Greeting!! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Jane Eyre New Member
since 2009-01-09
Posts 9Canada |
Oh thank you! You guys are so sweet! Thank you for the warm welcomes!  |
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Hope Fleeting Member
since 2009-02-23
Posts 52Smalltown, Somewhere |
What a wonderful way to capture the warm feeling of butterflies upon meeting someone that's capture your attention. I look forward to reading more posted by you.  Welcome to the Corner Pub! ~ Previously Known as Broken_Winged_Angel and BrokenWinged_Angel~ |
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turtle Senior Member
since 2009-01-23
Posts 548Harbor |
Hi Jane, This is one of the sweeter poems I've read on the subject of new found love. very nice. turtle |
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Jane Eyre New Member
since 2009-01-09
Posts 9Canada |
Oh thank you everyone! Your comments are so nice! They really make my day to read! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Welcome to our corner. lYou captured this moment of excitement and embarrassment very well. Joyce |
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Jane Eyre New Member
since 2009-01-09
Posts 9Canada |
Oh thank you ..Believe it or not, I asked a guy out with this poem once. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
  WELCOME TO PIP ARCTIC WIND |
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AlluraD Junior Member
since 2009-05-06
Posts 28Florida |
*s* You capture so well that heart pounding feeling when everything stops and wishes come true...even if they floor one into silence...enjoyed this~ |
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