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skymist2 Junior Member
since 2009-04-14
Posts 26Florida |
The candlelight flickers against the dark wall with shadows that play up and down in the hall. A delicate glow that is dancing around, in silence she walks in her beautiful gown. A candlestick carried in her pale, white hand she silently glides through the hallways so grand. The house remains empty except her alone, and now for her wickedness she must atone. The candlelight always is glowing it’s told, although no one lives there, the stories unfold of how she walks nightly, her sins to confess, in silence she walks in her beautiful dress. |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sky: Eerie poem but has a nice flow and I really like it. Trillium Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Nicely done and held my interest to the end. Joyce |
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skymist2 Junior Member
since 2009-04-14
Posts 26Florida |
Thank you both for your kind comments. Sky |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
La contessa è un fantasma? Your name sounds Italian like the Contessa. This is a fascinating write, but I wouldn't want to meet her ... Love, Margherita  |
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AlluraD Junior Member
since 2009-05-06
Posts 28Florida |
I see her...and wish I knew more. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
you should write several about the Contessa, keep the story going now that you've captured our interest Rex |
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