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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2009-01-31 02:37 PM


I remember how I hated
That decorated box
And wanted to be absent on that day.
My sad excuses did not fly,
I just had to pretend
To be happy for the cards that came my way.

Pretty Helen had the biggest pile,
Accepted as her due.
We knew which boy had sent the biggest one.
He tried hard not to look at her,
As she opened it and read
And to ignore the other boys poking fun.

My mama had insisted
I take one for every child,
So everyone would get a card or two.
Allowing for the teacher's,
As I took a look around,
There was only one more card for little Sue.

She opened it and read it,
Smiled her shy smile at me.
I wondered how my darling mother knew
That if I did not remember
There would be some lonely child
With only teacher's card to see her through.

Joyce 01/31/09


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1 posted 2009-02-01 03:54 AM


Joyce,

This is sweet, but brings back those memories of feeling excluded. It's sad that some children just are singled out to be ignored.  

I truly enjoy your poetry.  Happy Valentine's Day.

Alison

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2 posted 2009-02-01 05:40 AM


Awww This Beautiful and touched my heart
even though i was one of three girls i was more or less ignored, my parents were all for the other two i was a nightmare as a child a typical tomboy and the other two were girly
girls,
and i just spent many hours alone writing my poems
Thank you for sharing

Annie

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3 posted 2009-02-01 01:13 PM


You know Joyce I never even thought about that until you wrote this poem, as I used to get a box full.  We made these boxes for the day out of Kleenix boxes, and now that you brought it to light, I can almost pictures this girl in the corner in my room, whose box as virtually empty.  Sad, when children are singled out.
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4 posted 2009-02-01 02:23 PM


Dear Joyce:

This brought back memories for me too. I was so shy as a young girl it was hard for me to make friends and Valentine's Day was torture!  I seldom got more than a couple of cards and the other girls got scads of them!  It seemed so important then!

Love
Betty Lou

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5 posted 2009-02-01 09:23 PM


When you are young and shy it is hard not to be miserable when you feel left out.  I hope that this practice has been stopped and I hope everyone is obliged to bring one for each or not at all.  Thanks everyone  for answering. Joyce
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6 posted 2009-02-25 12:19 PM


I was always the one people forgot to count when bringing treats for the class or passing out cards.  Your mother is a wise woman for reminding you to take cards for everyone

~ Previously Known as Broken_Winged_Angel and BrokenWinged_Angel~

I know when to bow my head in defeat and move on...

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