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skoolyardturtle
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since 2005-06-28
Posts 96


0 posted 2008-11-24 12:40 PM


i awoke to the sound of the commotion all around me
the commotion of the world busy doing what it always does
turning...moving on its axis no matter how much i will it not to
every living thing breathing heavily into my ears
until time continues to slip away from me once again
i don't want to wither in silence....or fade while the world looks on
an existence acknowledged by somber glances
and sighs at the tv screen

lonely star, i'm burned out at the base
and tossed aside a road without a sign in sight
no direction or explanation
but i'm lost for the good of all who wonder where the time goes
so lend me a passing glance
and let my smouldering soul lend you questions to scream silently
to the universe so vast and overwhelming
where a star burns brightly against the strangle hold of each passing moment
flickering and fading with our feeble bodies
descending, crumbling to the earth below

my feelings rest with that burning star
my hope burns brightly with that dying star
my star that struggles against its nature
and burns brighter and more defiantly against my every worry
my every fear
and sets my soul on fire
the embers spreading and engulfing their planet
their comfort
their illusion of living free of the grip of the sand that slips through their frigid fingers
.....as they set themselves ablaze only to fade
without a flame or flicker in sight

so burn with your star.
burn with your star. whoever you are.

I want life in every word, to the extent that it's absurd.- The Postal Service

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Pantheress
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since 2008-11-02
Posts 215
Queensland, Australia
1 posted 2008-11-24 08:13 AM


I really enjoyed reading your poem, thank you for sharing this with me..
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2008-11-24 08:17 AM


quote:
my hope burns brightly with that dying star



Beautiful!

Questions arise whenever we look at the vastness of Universe and we are overwhelmed.  When we linger a little longer, beyond the duration of a question, we suddenly perceive our oneness with All there is and we enjoy to be in the flow ... and that is an answer that fills us with awe.

Love,
Margherita

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