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Echoes |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
ECHOESThis is a place of great peace, A monument to the spiritual, How sweet the fragrances Of Mother Earth. They spread throughout The mountain's shelter, Clinging to its ridges, And bouncing on the breeze, A celebration of life, Of all that is good. From here I can see above, The cave where my chief and I Became as one ...for the first time. In our youngness We could climb to such heights. In age I can but remember ...and smile. I am filled with memories Of such joyful times. I dabble my feet In the clear water of the stream, As it drifts in and out Of the water-smoothed rock. My heart leaps As my recollections Allow me to hear The laughter of our youth That is still reflected From the canyon walls, A cherished echo from the past. My time for tears ...has ended, I know he who holds my heart Has gone before ...into the unknown realm, To settle my place On the Higher Plain. For the Creator of All Things Has promised us Eternity. I have crept with reverence into the Church of the white man. Listened to the preacher, And learned the words of prayers and hymns. But I am naive in such ways, Do not understand why The white man has their Church, Imprisoned within walls Of their own making. I believe every moment I am within the presence Of the Great Spirit, His Sanctuary surrounds me. I am at one with all things For we are all the creation Of this Noble Chief and Father. Sadness cannot live within The heart of this thankful soul. With raised arms I shout silently From the bowels Of this beloved canyon, And I listen to my echo As it is carried back to me On a friendly wind. It is all reflection ...echoes. [This message has been edited by SPIRIT (11-10-2008 04:43 PM).] |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Just lovely! |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
This has an almost surreal feel, I love the setting that you have painted. Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Dear Dinah Welcome back to this Corner with your beautiful poem. It is peaceful, pure and delightful. Love, Joyce |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
I appreciate you all taking the time to read and comment Dinah |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dinah: I loved this poem and I agree, no church can rival the great outdoors for beauty and inspiration. Betty lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Thank you very much Dinah |
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