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Faces |
SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
FacesYou lay before me In such sweet peacefulness And I cherish the face That is now ...weathered and old. I admire the character That is etched distinctly Within each wrinkle, I feel that I can trace Your life journey, In every precious line That meanders lazily across The handsome face of your youth. I too in aging Have hidden my youngness ...my beauty Beneath the crumpled folds Of my skin. My face shares Its history - with yours. BUT! Together, We are forever Handsome and beautiful, For age has not diminished That which we have had, And will haveā¦into eternity. You awake, You smile. You are ...joy, My joy. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I find it also truly amazing that the older we get the more forgiving and understanding we become if we choose that route to go. The rest, get hardened and look much older. I liked this poem a lot. |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Hi das, This feels just so endearing Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
What a loving poem. How I envy those who are privileged to grow old with the love of their youth. Joyce |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Thank you all for reading me. ...me too Joyce, just wishful thinking on my part Dinah |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dinah: A lovely, tender poem and a joy to read. Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Hope Fleeting Member
since 2009-02-23
Posts 52Smalltown, Somewhere |
This is one that I have to add to my library. It's so tenderly written and full of love... ~ Previously Known as Broken_Winged_Angel and BrokenWinged_Angel~ |
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