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Ada'Do'Lis'Do'Ti
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since 2006-07-04
Posts 24
germany
0 posted 2008-10-04 08:21 PM

The last leaves dance to the ground.
Winds blow causing everyone to shiver.

You hold me close as we drift down.
Now to see what dreams deliver.

Through the night sing of romance.
Your embrace fills with ecstasy.

Here we are one last chance.
Embrace with me this gravity.

Darkness comes taking you away.
My hearts blood fully congeals.

No passion to keep it at bay.
This emptiness that I conceal.

Loneliness so irrepressible.
Soft white cold swollows me.

Landscape so indistinguishable.
I am So horribly free.
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KatKali
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since 2008-01-03
Posts 67
Where the wispers grow louder
1 posted 2008-10-06 10:58 PM

I'm sorry but I have only one word for this not like I normally would it was beautiful simply beautiful

A beautiful Bird,
Perched high
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2 posted 2008-10-06 11:27 PM

I could actually see the "steam" Well done!
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