Corner Pub #3 |
Draw Me A Picture |
jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Draw me a picture of your love So I can see whats in your heart from above. As the angels guide your hand and heart I know it was you and me from the start All I wanted from you was your love A love that was blessed from God above. It's not simple, it's complicated you see To express the love inside of you and me Don't draw me a picture about negativity anymore Don't want to pick at these heart felt sores The angels are here I can hear them sing True love is something between you and me Our love and laughter that is felt from the heart Came when we first met and it tamed our souls You know now how much I love you dear Because together we have lost the fear we first had
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Love is surely always blessed from Above. And it's good to overcome fear, which is the greatest obstacle we can find on our journey through life. Beautiful song of love, dear Kimberly. Love, Margherita |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
LSometimes we must love with blind faith. Love, Joyce |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Margherita and Joyce: Thank you for your comments, I always appreciate them. This song-poem was written back in the 90's when I was a bit younger. I am finishing polishing up the poems without changing their meaning. Hugs Kimberly
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Such a beautiful love poem. You just took me along with you on this one. Alison |
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Again Junior Member
since 2008-05-13
Posts 47 |
This is so beautiful...it made me think of the person I still loved and always will love. =) When I started reading it was with a quick pace, but then your words slowed me down and I was able to take it all in much more deeper. Really good writing. |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Longing oh so beautiful.. and if it were real and true.. sone of life's most fervent prayers would be answered Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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BrokenWinged_Angel Junior Member
since 2005-12-17
Posts 29 |
I'm confused as to if you were writing about someone that used to love you or writing about someone you wished loved you in the same way you loved them. The second stanza's first line is what threw me off. Other then that, it's an honest poem that speaks straight to the heart. BWA~ ~Formerly known as Broken Winged Angel~ |
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notwritten Junior Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 10 |
Very good. Keep smiling. :-) |
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