Corner Pub #3 |
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Prelude to my Life |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Traveling down the birth canal I came head first Unaware of my destination Only knowing, My body was suddenly cold A feeling I had never felt before For nine months I had been growing and developing Within the safe warm cocoon of My mother's womb Now I had plunged Into a world I had never known Now I was not in the dark anymore Light was all around me Opening my eyes I tried to see what was in this new place That was alive with voices and sounds, I had only heard faintly Before my arrival I felt new sensations Upon my skin as People in white washed me, Dried me, and wrapped me tightly I was screaming, afraid Not knowing, what would be my fate? Then someone who held me Placed me within my mother's arms Her scent was familiar Her voice assuring I stopped crying I looked into her eyes And I knew I was right where I belonged. |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
How lovely. The most dramatic event in a person's life and no ability to report it. you have been that voice. Love, Joyce |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Songbird: I really enjoyed this! Such a dramatic event, especially for the baby and no one to commune with, until put back in her mother's arms. It's hard to even imagine how terrifying it must be for an infant. Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SongBird~ Marcia ... you sing a lifelong song of connection~ Beautifully done dear friend~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
This is a nice poem. Good job. -Juju -Juju |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
SongBird, This is one of your best. The way you wrote such a picture of what it was like for the baby. I loved it. ![]() |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
Love this one. well written and so true. Hugs June xxx |
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