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skoolyardturtle Member
since 2005-06-28
Posts 96 |
A song i wrote not too long ago. Dot thingies added in for dramatic pauses. Please. Enjoy. loneliness is falling from the trees ... ........... but all i want to do is stay in bed ..... you're apathy is apparent... .... to me ... good morning sunshine, how did you sleep? ...... coughing out the brain, but you were first... to realize there was a problem.... .... with me.... .... spending nights waiting for your eyes to open up... i realize i have never had a better day .... today was my first... of better days.... spending nights, waiting for my eyes to open up... and realize that i had never had.... a perfect sunny day today was always my... |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I have not seen you in a while. (: -Juju -<>-~-<>-~-<>- |
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skoolyardturtle Member
since 2005-06-28
Posts 96 |
Yeah...I don't want to sound like i'm complaining, but after my first few posts people just stop giving feedback, no matter how many comments i left. So I'll show up every few months or so. But i'll be posting in corner pub more often. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Yes it is hard to have no one reply to your poems. I know. Sometimes sticking in there is good as well. I liked the mood of your poem alot. -Juju -Juju |
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