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r v wooo
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since 2007-08-07
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0 posted 2007-11-05 12:07 PM


                   Chaotic Order

Life begets life!
However, as living entities,
we are but mechanized ravens and vultures,
existing as Darth Vaders,
in a feeding frenzy,
in a wilderness of our own,
surviving on carrion.

I hear obtuse children
and know them
as Draconian blood suckers
of their parent's love.

I see the great white sharks
of corporate enterprises,
as parasites,
carried on the backs of faceless workers.

I feel ingratitude,
sharper than a serpent's sting,
in a world devoid of compassion,
yielding to unruly youth,
to ignorance and to chaos.

Yet, from the cold calloused insights
of the day,
there is a Pandora's box,
giving hope!
For life begets life
and out of chaos,
order comes!

[This message has been edited by r v wooo (11-06-2007 12:15 AM).]

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r v wooo
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since 2007-08-07
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1 posted 2007-11-05 12:16 PM


thank you, pegasus, for the insights in "false echos".
pegasus111
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2 posted 2007-11-08 07:11 AM


glad to be of service...lol..this piece is dark but, sobering. I fear that the balance in the struggle between good & evil may be tipping in favor of evil as more and more people lose their spirituality. Case in point..."The Golden Compass"

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



r v wooo
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since 2007-08-07
Posts 656

3 posted 2007-11-09 10:10 AM


pegasus, interesting...you mention "the golden compass". have only read a synopsis and not the book...but have an interest in pullman's focus on "truth and dust". the superman comics did a good job of endoctrination of children in the '40's and '50's in reference to "truth". the quest for truth serums or sera and mind kontroll studies such as mk ultra was expanded in the '60's with the use of "mayonaise" or lsd25. interesting how these items continue to resurface, today, as alethimeters and dust.  
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