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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
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I'm on the internet Click on Southern Comfort Cause that's who I am And I'm a little more than slightly disappointed When all I see Is Hip-Hop and R&B Don't get me wrong I love those genres as they are But are those really The number one southern stars? Is that really what southern comfort is? Cause I think it's Sittin' on the front porch in a large wicker chair Drinkin' iced tea and watchin' the sun go down Maybe that's just me Or maybe I just don't get out much But I'm just a simple southern girl Who knows what it's like In a simple southern world Free spirited and classy Loud-mouthed and bossy Yep, that's who I am And If I could hear one song Talk about my Sweet Ft. Walton Or Gorgeous Georgia Then I'd be happy Then they'd actually be singin' Some sweet southern comfort To me [This message has been edited by pen&paper (10-01-2007 10:04 AM).] |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
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pen and paper...a lot more insights but i have to go...will be back late tonite. look forward to reading your poem. will comment later in the evening. |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
i am unable to write...am exhausted...will try again in the morning. |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
i am unable to write...am exhausted...will try again in the morning. |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
sorry, i fell asleep at my computer last nite and i did so much want to write. i tracked back in time to some of your earlier poetry...this one "sweet southern comfort" attracted my attention on two levels. one, it did not convey emotional pain and suffering only a longing...an attainable longing! i was able to identify with that...time enables us to suppress pain but never the suffering! the second level of interest in the poem was the strangeness of the words that should be ending in the letter "g" and each place in the poem where an apostrophe should have been used but was replaced by some unconventional symbols. i was wondering if this was intentional or if it was some type of viral attacthment to the poem. also, noticed the symbols in the poem "wings to fly(in you)". |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
sorry bout the weird symbols...I hate it when that happens... |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
to every happening there is a cause and an effect. i wonder why? the long drawn out whistle of a train makes me lonely, not in daytime but nitetime, only! heartache,separation and a yearning cry, deep within my heart an echo! i wonder why? |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
I wonder... I wonder... |
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