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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
Fire rose across the dome; It splayed its fingers, peace. Clouds outlined with flames of orange Commanded night to cease. The still, it roared way above The mighty Huron Lake Silently He spilled His love As day prepared to break. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
How lovely!!! Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Barb~ This is STUNNING imagery !!! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
Thanks, Poet Sisters. I wrote it up at the lake this morning where I go to write or to think about writing. Barb |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Gorgeous Barb! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
beautiful poem. |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
oh, beasley, i envy you and your lake. i imagine it is peaceful there. it is important to have such a place where the mind can be one with nature. thank you for sharing the morning sky experience. [This message has been edited by r v wooo (09-26-2007 09:01 AM).] |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
I miss the peacefulness of the county, you brought back memories for me of the daybreaking sky there. I hope to be able to someday be able to write in the country again. Your poem is beautiful. |
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