The Polaroid: "I can't do this anymore"

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The Polaroid: "I can't do this anymore"

IntoTheRain
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since 2006-01-29

Posts 51
Westwood, CA

0 posted 2007-09-13 07:03 AM

You can’t leave. You’re bound to the moment. Transfixed, caught in the vacant shadow of the crucified. A symmetry so familiar, acknowledging denial. Just feeling is thinking too much. Faultless of course, closed eyes wide open. A million rays of light all leading out. Darling, you follow only to swallow whole. One hundred years of hanging, looking with horror at restless seas below. Steady, leaving half as fast as you came. A hand draws back, onward towards the end. An open door begging for attention. Brave friend horizon, I’ve lost the certainty that you will live.

moondogz
Member

since 2007-05-01

Posts 397
Great White North

1 posted 2007-09-13 11:12 PM

hey rain, i really like this poem, "Transfixed, caught in the vacant shadow of the crucified."
wow..that sentence alone just knocks me out.
The whole poem is just excellent...thanks.

moon.

r v wooo
Senior Member

since 2007-08-07

Posts 656

2 posted 2007-09-15 10:00 AM

i'm going to need more time to ponder the words...interesting and intriguing poem!

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