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thebop
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since 2006-12-18
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0 posted 2007-09-11 05:34 PM


A body of water is called the sea
Often being a lonely place to be
The sea is always briny and deep
Where sunrays stretch and seep

All day the sea is full of mirth
Covering many miles of earth
Little seals to big orca whales
Shiny fishes to colorful seashells

When the day and the night meet
A reddish glow looms in the sunset
The horizon and sunset hug the sea
The sea ebbs and flows indefintely

Brenda Hall aka thebop
"thepassionatepoet"

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r v wooo
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since 2007-08-07
Posts 656

1 posted 2007-09-14 01:54 PM


i liked your poem...it stimulated many old memories of the sea and old friends, c sharp and c wolf.
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