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Trillium
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0 posted 2006-09-30 10:32 PM






Cake Walk

The school sent out a brief request,
That every mother make her best
Cake, to bring to the spring fair.
Of course, our family would be there.
I made a Devil's Food.My son,
Explaining when the cake was done,
That he would win it back so we
Could dine upon it lavishly!

I told him what a cake walk meant.
He scrapped together every cent
His six year piggy bank revealed
And thought that he was then well-heeled!
I was aware the teachers knew
The plan he was committed to.
The music rang, the children then
Marched around the chairs and when
It stopped, they hurried to sit down.
I saw my young son give a frown!

He didn't find the winning chair
And showed his disappointment there.
Twelve times he marched, cakes disappeared
But mine was still there and he feared!
Then suddenly, he reached his goal.
The cake was his! It warmed my soul!
Those teachers were so very wise.
They saved that cake to be his prize!
Upon each face a grin appeared
And all the children laughed and cheered!




Betty Lou Hebert

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2006-10-01 10:04 AM


Adorable subject.  Little boys can be so determined.  Love, Joyce
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2 posted 2006-10-01 01:46 PM


BettyLou~

Oh yummy !
Devil's Food cake
just the kind I'd like to take
a big bite of, so I know why
My Ronnie, just couldn't pass it by~

Tell him that
he really should
share it with Marge
if it's so good~

I know beyond
a shadow of a doubt
because MY RONNIE is so nice
he'd let me have
a great big slice~

HI RONNIE

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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3 posted 2006-10-01 02:54 PM


good write!

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4 posted 2006-10-01 06:28 PM


Dear Joyce:  My boys were sure that way! I guess it's a good thing in life. We were sure glad he finally won the cake he wanted!

Love
Betty Lou

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5 posted 2006-10-01 06:36 PM


Dear Marge:

You can bet you would get a big piece!!

Love
Betty Lou

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6 posted 2006-10-01 06:36 PM


Juju:  Thank you for reading!

Betty Lou

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7 posted 2006-10-02 03:54 PM


this is a heartwarming moment to cherish. nicely done dear lady

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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8 posted 2006-10-02 07:20 PM


pegasus111:  Thank you! One of those special memories!

Betty Lou

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9 posted 2006-10-21 10:22 PM


So funny, and gave such a very clear image of it happening.
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10 posted 2006-10-21 11:12 PM


shattered silver:  Thanks so much for reading this!  It was a special moment in my family!

Betty Lou

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