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irishlad
New Member

since 2007-07-29

Posts 1

0 posted 2007-07-29 07:22 AM

this is just a free verse I wrote trying to just spill whatever was on my mind at the time...humanity is full of fear but we are always struggling to overcome something we all share and know too well...

blindly falling to submit,
peasants under the gun.
the more want, the more need.
extinct our need.

the greed
that blissful feeling,
to embrace power.
feel purpose
of liberty
of life.

this touch of the soul we all share,
incapable of balance.
our defeat of oneself.
for he who cannot reach within.

incapable of control,
this ignorance of passion,

survival.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2007-07-29 11:03 AM

IrishLad~
WELCOME to the PiP Forums ... the Corner Pub is a nice place to fling your hat~

'this touch of the soul we all share,'
I adore the thought of sharing the 'touch of the soul'~

'incapable of balance.'

As a Libra ... I strive to seek 'balance' in all phases of daily existence~
It's not EASY .... but I sure try~

Enjoyed the read~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

2 posted 2007-08-01 10:07 AM

Hi irishlad,

This is beautiful truly! Welcome to passions and I really hope to see more of your posts

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

r v wooo
Senior Member

since 2007-08-07

Posts 656

3 posted 2007-08-12 12:35 PM

i'm, also, new here! your poem talked to me.
i think of myself as a survivalist...i see myself as the huntee rather than the hunter.hope to see more of your work.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2007-08-12 02:33 PM

Welcome to our corner. I think you will find it a safe refuge. Keep up the good work. Love, Joyce

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