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Twilight Skies (A Terzanelle)
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Twilight Skies I walk beneath the twilight skies filled with hues of blue and red. I hear nature sing her cries. This night the ground will be my bed as I dream underneath a moonlit sky filled with hues of blue and red. I sit there dazed in a natural high and I take in her grande majestic view as I dream underneath a moonlit sky. My thoughts once again drift off to you nature has taken me under her spell and I take in her grande majestic view. Oh what stories mother nature does tell I listen to her whisper in the breeze, Nature has taken me under her spell. All is calm, peace prevails with ease I walk beneath the twilight skies. I listen to her whisper in the breeze, I hear nature sing her cries.
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Have I told you that you are such a beautiful writer? You are. A |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Alison, sometimes I swear you make me wanna cry. Thank you so much dear heart for your kindness. Hugs to you. |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Very very surreal, I absolutely adore this.. Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Took me 50 years to learn to SPELL terxanelle and here you are writing perfect ones...just ain't fair!  Beautiful work, gentle one....  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Michelle, thank you so very much for that.  ah Dear Deer, I can't say this is perfect because I am not sure it is even correct but it was one of my first attempts at it. Thank God it doesn't call for da-dumming because we both know me and my accent here can't da-dum properly. Thanks for peekin in sweetie. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
You have taken this form and made it your own. Beautiful. Joyce |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Enjoyed... *~Coco~* |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
No idea what all that 'tecno-bable' is my friend, but I do know when I like something and the words are wonderful to me... much enjoyed... j. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I miss you, girly. xoxox Alison |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
A really outstanding write! Betty Lou (Trillium) Betty Lou Hebert |
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Abbeon Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228Curiousity, and wonder |
Makes me home sick... To dream under dusk, Ahh now i long more then ever for spring. Words have power, Im going to unleash the power of my soul. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I just knew you too were a lover of nature.Very nice.Thank you. jo perry |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Jo has been pulling up some really good pieces... why didn't you share this with mom?   |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
I really enjoyed this!! |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
Humm...a poem from the past and I learned something about poetic form...Thanx! |
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Idaho Pen Junior Member
since 2012-08-20
Posts 16Idaho US |
what a beautiful picture you paint with your words...takes me home. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is awesome! Very beautiful expression! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Seems I commented on this waaaaay back in 2012 and after all this time, STILL don't know what a terxanelle gobbly-goop is, but still know a beautiful write when I see it. P.S. --- and I don't want to know at this point. It would probably just make my head hurt!! miss ya... jimmy |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Really lovely poem and I enjoyed it so much. Betty Lou |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Had to revisit this ... its such a beautiful read |
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johnthecat Junior Member Posts 18 England |
Such artistry. Such wonderful word pictures. Amazing. Thank you. May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out. |
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