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scarletbegonias
Member
since 2007-05-15
Posts 59


0 posted 2007-06-22 08:05 PM



my mind changes my heart so often
that both hurt
do i love You?
do i need You?
of course i do, of course i don't
what i fool i am
what a fool You are

i could love You for the same reasons i could hate You
because i am so close to You
and You are to me, unreachable
because i am kept by You, locked away
but not touched

Love me please
treat my heart tenderly
bruise my flesh, if You must
but touch me

so that i can live

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midnightblues
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
1 posted 2007-06-23 09:40 AM


Yes indeed..

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

2 posted 2007-07-08 09:54 AM


The ache in this is so evident.  We all have the need to be loved and touched and hopefully in that touch we are never left bruised.   Nicely penned.
jody5
Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876
California, U.S.A.
3 posted 2007-07-09 03:18 AM


What a splendid piece of art you have here that was beautiful and so heartfelt.

Hugs to you Kimberly


divine chaos
Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon
4 posted 2007-08-06 02:56 PM


i love this honey, i feel it *hugs*

~Sheli

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