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Beasley
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Cheboygan,MI USA

0 posted 2007-05-17 10:51 AM



Candy Cane Stains

In the land of candy corn dreams
Where clouds are made of
Marshmallow creams,
The rain is made from candy canes.
And peppermint puddles
Cause flowers to stain
A blushing bright pink,
With a streak, running white.
Oh how sweet
And what a delight
Where a cloudburst
Connects the plight of the rain
To the minty fresh tulips
That burst in a train
Of perfect profusion
And stunning sweet glare
Kissing the land
With a charming affair!


© Copyright 2007 Barbara Gedman - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2007-05-17 07:30 PM


Barb~
Tell me true ... you saw that 'Scentimental' rose of mine and got all inspired ... now didn't ya' ?

This sounds like the PERFECT sky for my little Landry Leigh to play under ... she LOVES peppermint canes~
(I took her some just today ... she says, "~Poet~, you're the best !"

I will have to share this with her on Monday~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Beasley
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2 posted 2007-05-18 09:56 AM


thanks, Marge. yes, i think it would make a good child's poem.
Barb

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3 posted 2007-05-18 10:39 AM


Delightful fantasy.  Joyce
Beasley
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4 posted 2007-05-18 12:10 PM


Thanks, Joyce.
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5 posted 2007-05-18 07:13 PM


Dear BarbA:

You have such a flair for this light and comical poetry and I enjoy it immensely!
Always a treat to read one!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

ladylisa
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6 posted 2007-06-04 09:46 AM


This is so good it made me feel like I was there .
RogueandPoet
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7 posted 2007-06-06 09:55 AM


I liked it, very original.
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