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Beasley
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since 2003-11-28
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Cheboygan,MI USA

0 posted 2007-04-01 09:20 AM


Focus
April 1, 2007

A ghostly warren
where hearts are enmeshed
veils reality

caught are we
within the spokes
of a giant wheel

where each spine teases,
entices, ensares
and we erroneously

deem this treasure
because of our need
so we lay our hearts bare

and look to humanity
to fulfill us
with what we desire

failure falls like night
when God isn’t first
in our core

© Copyright 2007 Barbara Gedman - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2007-04-01 09:36 AM


A truth that you have stated so well, Barbara.
Beasley
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2 posted 2007-04-01 10:21 AM


Thank you, Denise.
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Member Patricius
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3 posted 2007-04-01 08:43 PM


Very impressive!!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

midnightblues
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4 posted 2007-04-02 07:39 AM


Yes indeed..

Love,
MiCheLLe

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