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jody5
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since 2005-12-21
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0 posted 2007-02-22 08:01 PM



When the dark clouds seem to hang around

and it's hard to get out of bed.

Jump in the shower and let the ions wash

your troubles down the drain.

You'll be perky as though you had an

endorphine bath when you shower using soap.

You'll smell like a rose and your aroma

will spread joy to everyone's nose.

This tune is meant to make you laugh,

so, sing it when your in the shower or bath.

Then the sun will come out by noon

but it's the real truth, so enjoy life and

put a smile on your face.Be revived like

the flowers in the rain. Remember the depression

will leave if you just believe and the sun

will smile upon your face.

Written by songbird & jody5


[This message has been edited by jody5 (02-23-2007 05:20 PM).]

© Copyright 2007 Kimberly Benton - All Rights Reserved
Songbird
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1 posted 2007-02-22 11:35 PM


Kim, maybe it might be the best song anyone has ever heard but we sure had a lot of fun making it up in the car today! We enjoyed ourselves and that is what really matters!  luv ya

Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2007-02-23 03:29 PM


What fun.  It reminds me of when my daughters were young and we used to go down the road singing songs that we made up as we went.  Thanks for sharing.  Love, Joyce
jody5
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3 posted 2007-02-23 05:33 PM


Thank You Songbird for helping or writing the poem with me in the car.  I love having a friend like you.  I so loved doing it that I think we should do it again!

Joyce I did the same thing in the car when I was a kid.  We all sang songs to make the trip faster.  I am glad I brought back a good memory for you and everyone who reads it.  

Hugs Kimberly


butterflylp
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4 posted 2007-02-27 03:11 PM


I loved this. A shower always makes me feel better.
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2007-03-06 11:23 AM


Girls~
You're just having such fun !!

I have a little car muse that is always singing in to my ear as I drive merrily along~

Ended up having to get a mini recorder to catch those songs in transit~

Adore the smiles you two bring~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -             noles1@totcon.com

jody5
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since 2005-12-21
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California, U.S.A.
6 posted 2007-03-07 09:07 AM


Butterflylp;  Thank you for your comment.  I am so glad you liked our songpoem.  Welcome to Pip.

Marge: You know how much laughing can do for the soul.  Songbird loves to have me around because I continually make her laugh.  It's somthing I try to do to make this a happier world for everyone.  I wrote this song with songbird to help people with depression because I have problems with it and a shower, bath or swim dispose of the depression altogether.

Hugs to you both  Kimberly


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