Corner Pub #3 |
A Note" |
Vincent Member
since 2007-02-03
Posts 52 |
The hours of stillness granted the world, somewhere between many cigarettes, coffee and memories. Waves lap the shore with reliance, distant lights, faint murmuring of night once again. If by chance you happen upon this writing, a message in the outlines, and stars, where is a bottle when you need one" search for me, on distant shores, my" how I need you. Just a message, a word or two, sent to whom ever you are. Just a thought, someone is waiting that needs me too. "Patience is everything, time is a thief" a quote from a lonely man. I`ll leave my name drawn here in the sand, I think the child in us all. Leave my heart, for who might find it, desperate to return it to me. One more quote from every heart in the world.. Please hurry"....Vincent © Copyright 2006 Vincent |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A poignant plea, Vincent. Very intriguing. Joyce |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Overwhelming emotions.. very intriguing read.. Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
A very intriging write indeed. "Patience is everything, time is a thief" Oh my I love this part. Debo |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
This poem stirred alot of emotions. very nice. Hugs Kimberly |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
"I`ll leave my name drawn here in the sand, I think the child in us all." My favorite lines from all - I like the image (though sad and sort of wistful) it brings to my mine. Just a nit...the last line is maybe lacking the word "is", and should read...the child is in us all. (hope that's what you meant.) |
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