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Juju
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0 posted 2006-09-19 09:58 PM



Just Because

I found out today I was crazy
like the way you once loved me dad

You built me castles in the sand
I was a princess and nothing less

I could be resentful and hate you
From the fear still present in my mind

It seams all I do is hurt and cry
I break down and I cant trust others

Yet Everytime I amost say it
My memories wage war with in me

I found out today I was crazy
like the way you once loved me dad


I decided I am going to hang out here, because you guys are cool and reply to my poems.

-<>-~-<>-~-<>-  
*    Juju     *
-<>-~-<>-~-<>-

© Copyright 2006 Juju - All Rights Reserved
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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2006-09-20 02:53 PM


I know your poem has a meaning that I am unaware of but it shows much emotion.  Thanks for staying with us.  love, Joyce
Juju
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2 posted 2006-09-20 03:05 PM


well This poem doesn't have any secrete meanings.  Just about fealing betrayed by someone you love and still loving them. Thank you for the post

-Juju

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3 posted 2006-09-20 10:17 PM


Juju:  It's good to see you posting here and your poem has a lot of underlying emotion. This is the right place to express that. People here are very receptive!

Trillium

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Juju
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4 posted 2006-09-21 10:19 PM


Thank you!

-Juju

passing shadows
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5 posted 2006-09-22 10:39 AM


Juju, I sure understand this poem here very well...love is indeed unconditional sometimes, and it's the better kind of love
Juju
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6 posted 2006-09-24 10:22 AM


Thankyou PS. I am glad to see your around!

-Juju

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