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Vincent Member
since 2007-02-03
Posts 52 |
Storybook wishes riddled with stars, lost in forever, faith the cause.. reluctance has valor, reluctant can steal everything away, dreaming one miracle, invisible chains, fearing no ending praying there is not.. Every journey has cut you, welding each memory in place, every hand to save you, borrowed the pieces away. I am your every tomorrow, caves from the raging storm I am the heat that boils inside you, our faith, hand-in-hand. I am total and complete, the warrior, a harbor the quiet you hold in your soul. I am the silence, the nothing...without you...Vincent [a thought of love] © Copyright 2006 Vincent |
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jarrett Member
since 2006-05-10
Posts 72Ut, USA |
wow... I enjoyed this poem very much. Thank you. Tricia |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vincent~ This ... this .... is a wonderful thought - 'welding each memory in place' - especially for those, like me, who are so eternally nostalgic~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I would say this is several thoughts of love. Well done. Joyce |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Vincent, Your poetry is very sensitive. I like it alot. Bravo. Hugs Kimberly |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
wonderful and passionate poem Debo |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
I like this: I am total and complete, the warrior, a harbor the quiet you hold in your soul. Very surreal, bittersweet.. Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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