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Vincent Member
since 2007-02-03
Posts 52 |
Withered rose old love letters, held among dust and ribbons. Winds blow through paneless windows, cold stills the day. Years were held, empty hands, hearts forever wait. She dreamed alone.... dreams had not changed the day. Prayed alone... and know its hard to be alone. Feel a winter heart, gathering of leaves rush from abandon corners disturb nothing, what years have claimed. Silent I return the rose, gently close the door. Believe she dances this once lit cabin still........Vincent [I found this old cottage in the woods] |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Vincent: This is lovely and you campture the atmosphere well. Nice job! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
What a lovely sentimental write. Welcome. Joyce |
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Vincent Member
since 2007-02-03
Posts 52 |
thank you girls for reading me, and the reply. nice to meet you. Vincent |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vincent~ My goodness .. you are a breath of fresh air blowing in through the open Pub windows~ WELCOME to this little corner of PiP~ A beautifully structured read, poet~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Vincent Member
since 2007-02-03
Posts 52 |
thank you Marge, again. I`ve been told most of what I write is raw, unpolished" free-verse..but its the only way I can write. thanks again for your comments. Vincent |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Raw and unpolished can suit many of us, because it comes, unrehearsed, from the heart. Welcome to Passions, Vincent. Please, check your email for a very Special Greeting. |
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Vincent Member
since 2007-02-03
Posts 52 |
I have it, thank you so much Sunshine" thats way cool! and thanks for reading me. You have a great day.. Vincent |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
what a picture this has painted in my mind. I love it Debo |
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Vincent Member
since 2007-02-03
Posts 52 |
I wander a lot in the woods here, its amazing what you come across, and the thoughts they leave you with..thank you so much for reading me. Vincent |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Hi Vincent, Belated welcome to Passions Dreamy first post, I adore this  Hope to see more of your works. Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Vincent, Such a refreshing poem I really enjoyed the pictures you drew in my mind. you are very talented. Welcome with a hug Kimberly |
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