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kyler New Member
since 2007-06-21
Posts 9 |
Emotions They are what fill these pages I don't really know how to express them I don't talk about them either Usually know one hears about them or sees them But soon this book will be filled with them I will soon come to the end And when I do I hope by then I will be able to express them So then people will be able to know what I actually feel When that day comes I hope i'll be ready If not I might explode |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
it's almost sad, or maybe that's just the way i'm feeling today, any how i liked it. NIce meotion. Keep that- it's what brings words to life, poetry or no. Emotion is the key, remember that and you'll do well -Red If love were a picture that painting would never be finished. |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
the last line didn't really fit the poem but the rest was great i liked how it seemed like you were talking to no one in particular and yet to everyone as an individual |
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