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Teen Poetry #8

Something About You

totyfroty
New Member

since 2007-07-06

Posts 6

0 posted 2007-07-06 05:24 PM

Something About You

I found something
When I saw you
I found something
Which is very true
You gave me strength
You told me things
I heard your eyes
Speaking to me
I felt them sincere
I found you near
I thank God for you
Everyday my dear

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2007-07-06 05:51 PM

i love the last line its so sweet.

-Red

If love were a picture that painting would never be finished.

Jezzika
Member

since 2005-01-05

Posts 154
work

2 posted 2007-07-06 06:22 PM

This was really good..
I liked how it ended... The whole poem flowed very well

One trillion dollars could buy a heart a soul ~ Anti-Flag

totyfroty
New Member

since 2007-07-06

Posts 6

3 posted 2007-07-07 05:49 AM

Thanks guys

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2007-07-09 06:30 PM

Welcome to Passions I really liked this I thought it was so sweet.
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

5 posted 2007-07-10 06:02 PM

it such a sweet short poem i loved it

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