»
Archives
»
Teen Poetry #8
»
Leaving
| Teen Poetry #8 |
|
Leaving |
|
|
Alaina Member
since 2007-06-16
Posts 106 |
Walking in, the faces turn Everything inside is telling me to run out and scream. Their eyes are on my back, I can feel the burn. Please, let this just be a bad dream All I want is for this to end, The unwanted attention focused on me. I’ll never again feel the need to pretend, Pretty soon I can just be. Standing in the presence of such immaturity, I know I need to find people I can relate to. Then, I won’t feel this insecurity, I’ll have the chance to start my life out new. I can’t wait to open up my mind, Let people peer in and see my view. Someday I’ll be able to look behind And forget all the times I needed to be untrue. I know you'll be a sun in somebody else's sky, but why can't it be mine? -Eddie Vedder |
||
| © Copyright 2007 Alaina - All Rights Reserved | |||
SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
excellent!  |
||
|
WaterFairy103 Member
since 2006-05-31
Posts 196 |
Hey, this is really good! Excellent job! I've stopped fighting my inner demons... we're on the same side now. |
||
|
buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain |
amazzinggg!!! |
||
hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Wow there is always something to relate to in these blue pages  hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
||
|
surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
i wouldn't say thi is an amazing poem but that is just my opinion but it does seem to relate alot to my life in highschool |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
