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Me and You |
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~Jonnybalze223~ New Member
since 2006-09-19
Posts 5 |
Perfect piece of life thrown at me over night~ With a little hesitation brought a pure set together ~ A couple, brought together by god once again~ Love at first sight or remembered each others name~ Lived untouched waiting for that special moment~ With hope comes trust and a little bad luck~ Getting through it starts with L ends with E~ Me and her come together not for lust but to grow~ Forever is us, forever is love, forever is me and you~ |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
forever is me and you~ wow loved this line a good ending line yet another good post  ...hunnie* A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"Forever is us, forever is love, forever is me and you." That ending was just so beautiful. Wonderful job with this one! ~Alli~ |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
I've got to agree on the ending, it is just so beautiful to read! Thanks for sharing this piece "I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars." - Og Mandino @-->--- |
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