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forever*wishing
Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 178
where my heart is

0 posted 2006-09-25 02:45 AM

Across the slowly darkening highway, a girl walks alone,
she doesn’t know where she’s going, she doesn’t
know where’s she’s gone. Pushing forward with
every step she takes, one then the other. Could
she ever reach the end before it all smothers her?

Weak, she finds the strength to take one more
step; she then fell to the ground without another
breath. But then at that moment, something made
her look up, it was a light bright enough to blind
her. A deafening voice echoed through this empty
road, asking why she left from her only source of
life, the family that he gave her, and the only
thing keeping her alive. She couldn’t even speak,
she didn’t think it was real, but she felt it, and
this made her weak. Uttering nothing but a simple
dumbfounding breathe, the voice went on and she
lifted up her head.

It was a deep, life changing sound flowing through
her ears, and now everything made sense, now it
seemed so real. He told her that he loved her, and
though she couldn’t see, she truly did believe. He
told her where she belonged, and that she had to
go back. He gave her strength, and showed her the
way.

She walked up to the door, took a long deep
breathe, and with a half smile, curiously looked
through the glass. She saw happiness, but sadness
for she wasn’t with there. Opening the door, she
saw heads turn smiles upon there faces, they ran
toward her with open arms, she was amazed, and she
couldn’t be pulled down now. They really did love,
her, they actually did care.
She turned around to show her new found happiness,
but the light wasn’t there…she saw that the it
wasn’t gone, but was just inside her. She lived
for that moment, for the light she remembered, the
rest of her life she kept it in her heart. For
every moment in her life, she lived for Jesus
Christ.

[This message has been edited by forever*wishing (09-25-2006 11:58 AM).]

*wishfull*thinking*
Junior Member

since 2006-09-03

Posts 33
north east of england

1 posted 2006-09-25 11:43 AM

i'm not tryihng to nag but i think you need to put into paragraph's as it makes it more interesting to read if you know what i mean! anyways it was still good

keep up the good work
love to see more

*Wishfull*thihking*

was known as poiseandrationality and sinsandtragdegies but long story

*coz i've seen love die way too many times when it deserved to be alive

forever*wishing
Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 178
where my heart is

2 posted 2006-09-25 11:54 AM

ok, ya that makes sense. thanx = )

forever*wishing
Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 178
where my heart is

3 posted 2006-10-01 01:27 AM

ok, i seriously dont really like this one anymore...

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