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Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work 
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 My heart is breaking in two just looking in your eyes makes me sadly realize what I need to do I rip my hand away trying not to cry I can’t take it any more not one more lie! I thought I could trust you but I guess I was wrong you made bad decisions …..and drug me along You’re face I can never forget the look of anguished pain but getting away from you is the only way I can stay sane Jezzika One trillion dollars could buy a heart a soul ~ Anti-Flag |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Welcome to Passions!!!!!!  Check your e-mail for a special greeting. What would you attempt to do...if you knew you could not fail?. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
dang Ringo! You beat me to it! LOL that is one of mine  ( kids that is)Jezz it's great....I'm proud of you girl  |
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Gifted Member
since 2007-06-26
Posts 140Caribbean |
I can see that somebody is driving you crazy, but in a good way. It's the type of crazy you want to have, just don't let it take over you or control you. Nice work. Peace. Love. Forgiveness. |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
thanks for sharing it was beautiful- something i needed to hear. It always amazes me how people like you know what i need when even i don't know know what i need. -Red ps welcome to passions. If love were a picture that painting would never be finished. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jezzika~ What a lovely entrance into PiP~ Poetic talent runs in the family, I see~  WELCOME to this circle of friends, sweetie~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work |
Thank you all very much for your awesome replies...  I am really excited to be part of this amazing site.... oh and btw Marge my mom loves you.. Just thought you should know.....  One trillion dollars could buy a heart a soul ~ Anti-Flag |
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Alaina Member
since 2007-06-16
Posts 106 |
i really liked this a lot. your description was great. Good work! I know you'll be a sun in somebody else's sky, but why can't it be mine? |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Jezzika...Enjoyed very much. You have a great teacher and a growing talent. Stick with it and you will venture places you never thought possible...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work |
Thank you guys so much for your awesome comments!! Sorry it took so long for me to get back to you guys I have been sick Thanks alot One trillion dollars could buy a heart a soul ~ Anti-Flag |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
Your poem is beautifully written, and welcome to PIP |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jessika~ quote:Aww, how sweet .. and ya' know what ? That love flows from this end too~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow this was so amazingly great for a first post.. ahh what took you so long anyway:P well hope to read more hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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