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WaterFairy103
Member

since 2006-05-31

Posts 196

0 posted 2006-09-19 09:06 PM

~This is a more of a song, and without me actually coming and singing it to you, you probably won't get the rhythm, but bear with me, i really love this one!~

Sometimes I dream about you,
when I'm lying next to him.
It's hard to hear your name on my lips.

And I hear your voice everywhere,
but I turn, and, and you're not there.
I''m never gonna get over this.

And I'm trying to forget who we were,
But it's hard when you've still got my heart
and I know you still care.

I go to work everyday,
and people stay outta my way.
You should see the way they look, when I talk to you.

Yeah when I sit here by this stone,
and pretend that I'm not alone,
it's hard to go on, now that you're gone.

And I'm trying to forget who we were,
But it's hard when you've still got my heart
and I know you'd still care.

The funeral was hard for me,
but I wanted to see you
for the very last time, I guess.

And I'm trying to forget who we were,
but it's hard when you've still got my heart
and I know you'd still care.

Sometimes I dream about you,
when I'm lying next to him.
It's hard to hear your name on my lips.

When I stopped trying to find the right guy, and concentrated on being the right girl, the right guy found me.

CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
Member

since 2003-07-16

Posts 248

1 posted 2006-09-19 11:26 PM

wow...terribly sad. amazing work, but terribly sad. && i think i got the rhythm.

Fantastic. I'm proud to be the first to respond.

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

2 posted 2006-09-20 10:11 AM

wow funeral was so unexpected i didnt think that would b how it ended

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2006-09-20 11:09 AM

i agree funeral so unexpected yea i think i kinda got the tune but maybe it wasn't the same tune as you but i loved this song it was beautifully written...
hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

4 posted 2007-06-09 05:42 PM

okay this is a super late reply but i was jus reading from a long time ago.. this is an amazing poem.. and i know how you felt. i wrote a poem about a man who i loved that passed away, and i just feel like i can see the exact flow of this.. I mean.. I dont know what to say, but somehow this comforts me.. i don't want to say to know that other people experience it, because that'd be terrible and selfish.. but it does help to know that even though you are sort of alone.. you aren't.. beautiful.. ttyl, and i really loved this

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

5 posted 2007-06-10 10:42 PM

i'd have to say this is one of my favourites as well it brought me to tears it was sad and yet so amazing i loved it alot

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