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WaterFairy103
Member

since 2006-05-31

Posts 196

0 posted 2007-06-04 11:41 PM

I know that there are problems,
I know your life gets rough.
I also know they've broken you,
And you built yourself back up.
If I could have a single wish,
I wouldn't wish your troubles away,
Because without those very troubles,
You wouldn't be who I love today.

If I were granted just one wish,
I know what it would be.
I know that you do, somewhat,
But I wish that you'd trust me.
I wish you'd trust me to be here for you,
I wish you'd trust me to be strong.
I wish you'd trust me to listen,
I wish you'd trust me to deal with what's wrong.

I just know it's hard on you,
And my heart aches when you hurt.
To help you, you should know by now,
I'd do anything that works.
I'd talk until your ears fall off,
Or listen until sunrise.
And I want you to know that, to your pain,
I'm not going to just shut my eyes.

If I were granted just one wish,
I know what it would be.
I know that you do, somewhat,
But I wish that you'd trust me.
I wish you'd trust me to be here for you,
I wish you'd trust me to be strong,
I wish you'd trust me to listen,
I wish you'd trust me to deal with what's wrong.

I know that you're trying,
And I adore you more for it.
But when you need help, I shouldn't be
The phone call you forget.
I wish you'd trust me to be here for you,
I wish you'd trust me to be strong,
I wish you'd trust me to listen,
I wish you'd trust me to deal with what's wrong.

I've stopped fighting my inner demons... we're on the same side now.

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

1 posted 2007-06-06 11:21 AM

i really enjoyed reading this! it was a great poem! i hope that you write more soon

Life is not a matter of destiny, but a matter of choice.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-06-06 03:09 PM

Wow the flow was really strong Loved this poem a lot.
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

3 posted 2007-06-10 10:45 PM

another great poem from you there was a few grammatical errors i think if i was reading it the right way but still a good job and i've been one of those people it describes it well

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