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Teen Poetry #8
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lustforgood
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since 2008-01-01
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singapore, singapore

0 posted 2008-01-02 02:23 PM



Take a look at our dad, the sun
My brother the mercury, having fun
And you the venus.
My rival will be earth, like right after birth
I'm the mars
Then came our big boys, jupiter
Followed my his minion, saturn
uranus, where all the poison is
Came Neptune
Pluto is our pet and it is playing with the balloon.

Party like the planets in the skies.
Enemies in disguise
You and me separated by one
There you go, I've missed the fun.

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