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wolf girl
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since 2007-12-03
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0 posted 2007-12-31 03:30 PM


i wake to your voice
its the sweetest noise
i dream about you both day and night
i wish that i could hold you tight
just hearing your voice makes everything ok
suddenly my fears have gone away
no more worries for today
the pain just went away

i no longer feel numb and useless
i am no longer clueless
you teach me things i never knew
you give me hope that i can start new
you fixing me cant you see?
how wonderful we could be

once im free ill see you everyday
then youll always take my pain away


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1 posted 2008-01-02 12:44 PM


Wow hunn this wuz soo beautifully written one of my favs by you
Krysti

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2 posted 2008-01-02 11:42 AM


Nice write. I always like your stuff that's why I wrote about it.
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