hows that for a happy ending?

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buttercupbaby
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since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

0 posted 2007-06-12 11:02 AM

Right now i'm pretty mad
And we had another fight
I think this time its over, for good
I'm not letting you back in tonight

Don't think you can cheat
then lie your way back in
i'm not letting you hurt me anymore
you'll never win my love again

all i need is the chance to say
get away, leave me alone
i can't believe i trusted you
i shoulda looked at you and known

i never understood how you could love me
and now i get that you never did
im not even that sad, so no tears
you wont see anything in my eyes

you said we would be forever
ha, like i ever thought that was truth
i shoulda known better than to let you in
i was being too foolish, a mistake in youth

when you said our love was lastin always
you mighta thought i would accept
but baby, just to let you know
that was the dumbest concept

forget it, im not planning any revenge
i just want you to know one thing
i never really loved you, you were just there
how's that for a happy ending?

~missy
My tears of love are a waste of time if I turn away..
my love is a waste of time
if you never stay

MegMeg
Member

since 2007-05-14

Posts 85
Virginia

1 posted 2007-06-12 11:29 AM

oo.. i'm sorry for your break-up, but apprantly you're not, nice poem, aggressive and....well...good.

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

2 posted 2007-06-12 12:46 PM

its okay :]
ya.. i was in a mad mood.. ha ha.. well, thanks for the reply

~missy
<font size=1 color=pink style=verdana>afraid of my feelings and falling too deep, but i had to let go of the pain let it rain down on me

WaterFairy103
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since 2006-05-31

Posts 196

3 posted 2007-06-12 01:50 PM

Well, I've always said that aggressive is good, so I love it! Very well-written, something I've been trying to say for months! Good job!

I've stopped fighting my inner demons... we're on the same side now.

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

4 posted 2007-06-12 06:54 PM

thank you!

hah, i always think my aggresive writes are better.. cause im just an angry person

lol jk, but thanks!

surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

5 posted 2007-06-12 11:11 PM

it was a good write it reads as if there is some bad feelings between you and the other person

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

6 posted 2007-06-13 04:41 PM

ha only a little bit ;] thanks for the replyy

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