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Literary Characters |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
Literary Characters Members of literary fiction have it the easiest of all Feelings of love and heartbreak appear at the writers call A rollercoaster ride that ends with the last lyrical word Of a manuscript turned book thus became read and heard Simple and usually obvious, the worlds though which they live Never a day in reality do they bear, or a thought to it they give What if the sun didn’t rise- the hero would make all reformed It leaves all of the audience happied, their hearts momentarily warmed The blood and toil of a book weaver- word lacer, riddled with emotion All her words have a movement that bring the desired feel and motion I feel trapped in a book- what a novel my poor life might become And what a price to pay for a literal work of language- a small petty sum So, what is my chance? The one I may have to live a literary reality It’s gone up in the smoke of the book you’re burning in spite of my plea Tired of little things dictating my life’s very goals and purposes I plan I’m trying, my very best- but it seems all fails even when I do the best I can I stuck my bare hand into your rip cage and fished around untill I found your heart. I ripped it out and tore it apart while saying 'You don't need th |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
ive never really read any kind of poetry like this. its unique in its own way, and i kinda dig it...alot |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
i liked this one alot it was very well written and i liked how you spaced it out and how it was about characters from literature i loved it alot it was fantastic |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
aw thanks, nothing like nice words to make me feel all toasty and warm inside. I stuck my bare hand into your rip cage and fished around until I found your heart ripped it out tore it apart while saying You dont need this anymore |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Welcome to Passions. really great first post loved it. hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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