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Teen Poetry #8

Crumbling Oasis

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

0 posted 2007-06-10 11:29 PM

The hole is growing bigger
As I watch the pieces crumble
And I'm falling
Falling farther than I ever have before
I need help,
Help through this never ending darkness
I feel lost
Never quite felt like this before
How do I make it stop
Stop this feeling from tearing me apart

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

1 posted 2007-06-11 02:27 PM

Very deep

i really liked the flow. nice poem.

Life is not a matter of destiny, but a matter of choice.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

2 posted 2007-06-12 04:58 PM

have i told you that i love your stuff- b/c i totally do.

-Reddetta

I stuck my bare hand into your rip cage and fished around until I found your heart ripped it out tore it apart while saying You dont need this anymore

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2007-06-14 01:05 AM

awe I loved this amazing work you have.
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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