Teen Poetry #8 |
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Mr. Omniscient Member
since 2006-10-28
Posts 134 |
I look at you and what do I see? Cheeks inflated as if stung by a bumblebee, You have blissful hands, Sensitive hands, Hands that cut through darkness and pull me into the light, A beautiful girl like you, You have to be Ms. Right. Rocks and clusters of metal wrapped around every crack and line can only form a smile ever so divine. We’re rich girl, we have millions, With those two flawless sapphires that grow under your eyelids and that treasure chest that contains those thirty-two pearls, What’s funny is the key to that chest, is merely a simple joke. Because that simple joke provokes a smile, And that beautiful smile lifts me up to heaven for a while. You see, Beauty doesn’t define you, You’re not part of beauty’s nature, You are beauty’s nature, and it is beauty you define. [This message has been edited by Mr. Omniscient (05-14-2007 10:09 PM).] |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
that is a beautiful poem it makes anyone feel special the way you describe the person in the poem great job |
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hunnie_girl![]() ![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Wow you're back I haven't seen you for so long here... I loved this it was so sweet. hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Mr. Omniscient Member
since 2006-10-28
Posts 134 |
Thank you all very much. |
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