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Amazing (work in progress) |
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mallsup07 New Member
since 2007-05-07
Posts 3Iowa, USA |
This boy is amazing As good as it gets He makes me feel special There are no regrets From his daring brown eyes To his rusty red hair He always makes me smile With his heartwarming stare As he takes my hand in his While we walk side by side My smile gets so big And my feelings I can’t hide Before I met him My life seemed so gloomy I couldn’t imagine A time I’d be blooming The days are brighter And the nights less cold I’ve given him my heart To have and to hold Dreaming of his laughter Imagining his kiss Living happily ever after In our own eternal bliss |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Michelle~ WELCOME to PiP~ You will come to really ejoy this circle of poetic friends~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
Welcome to PiP and really really good first post |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!  We hope your stay with us is a long and happy one. What would you attempt to do...if you knew you could not fail?. www.myspace.com/mindlesspoet |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
very good poem i liked it alot and i can relate to it quite alot which is always good in my eyes great job |
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mallsup07 New Member
since 2007-05-07
Posts 3Iowa, USA |
Thanks all for the good feedback! |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Wow this was good I can relate to this. Welcome to Passions hope to read more soon... hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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