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Little Blue Panties |
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MixedChica Junior Member
since 2006-11-10
Posts 34 |
It’s surreal to me that I’m standing here With Black veiled over my face As I pray to god you felt no pain As you left this place The man they said violated you Your little blue panties were touched When that man was satisfied It was only the trigger he clutched Two silver bullets entered you heart A third to his name And he was the last one to hold my baby As her pure body went lame Sweetie tell me where are you Are you truly happier there? Did god forgive that man who took you? Does god even care? |
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WaterFairy103 Member
since 2006-05-31
Posts 196 |
Very nicely written. Dark and twisty, but nicely written nonetheless. I've stopped fighting my inner demons... we're on the same side now. |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
ur a talented writer.. Miss you Chica |
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
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