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Teen Poetry #8

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

0 posted 2007-04-26 04:47 PM

You think I will
But I wont
You say you know ME
But you don't

MY name is not enough
To know the secrets of MY soul
The things I hide
From the world
Things you don't deserve to know

You know I'm smart
But do you know
MY favorite subject
The places I go
When I'm mad or feeling stressed
The words I like
The way I dress?

This uniform and common scowl
Are not the normal ME
The person I am when with MY friends

Is the person YOU should try to see

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

1 posted 2007-04-26 09:20 PM

another great poem from you i hope to read even more and i liked this one alot because i could relate to it fairly well another great poem

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

2 posted 2007-04-27 12:08 PM

I like the strength in this poem. Your poems always have great emotion. This one is full of emotion but it sounds like the point of view of someone relatable and rebellious. Its nice to be able to understand the persona the poem is about.,

One of my favorite poems.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2007-04-30 12:42 PM

I really really like this it was good, i can really relate to this too.
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

bekahlekah45
Senior Member

since 2006-03-14

Posts 533

4 posted 2007-05-02 06:20 PM

mm..i liked this alot! it really was incitedful...well i guess maybe that isnt the right word. hmm, i think i liked the amount of truth it held. because i think everyone can relate to it and i like that.
Deff 2 thumbs up for this one : )

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

5 posted 2007-05-07 11:49 AM

Great!

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