Teen Poetry #8 |
![]() ![]() |
Can't live without you |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
hunnie_girl![]() ![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
I can't think of one damn thing to say, That would change what happened yesterday, I lie awake wishing you'd call, Watching my wish ricochet off the wall, I don't know how bad it is, I can't tell, Now i'm beside myself inside this hell, I just can't get you out of my head, All that you did all you said, I know I'm overreacting a bit, But I'm left alone in a bottomless pit, I see your face everytime my eyes close, I can't live without you and part of me knows. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
||
© Copyright 2007 Krysti - All Rights Reserved | |||
Huggz_N_Kissez3532 New Member
since 2007-04-26
Posts 1Wichita, Ks |
This is a really good poem! i can relate to it. i hope to read more of ur poems. ![]() Love Alwayz Me, |
||
vexx Junior Member
since 2007-04-20
Posts 14denmark/bornholm |
it speaks so beautifully clear about something i think most pepoel have felt i liked that in it |
||
surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
i could relate to it in a sense my experience was a bit different from what i think you are writing but i like when an author can get others to relate to their poems so this was a really good job i liked it |
||
hunnie_girl![]() ![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
thank you all for your relplies ![]() hunnie ![]() ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
||
buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain |
Wow hunnie.. it knocked me down :] love it:]] |
||
![]() ![]() |
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |